Thursday, October 2, 2008

Revision Plan

In order for me to complete my Final Draft I must consider all the elements, stages, and archetypes of the hero's journey and make sure they are encorporated into my memior.

Along with correcting all gramatical and spelling errors

Specifically I will do a better job of connecting the paragraphs so that the reader doesn't have to figure things out for herself.

I will also mention that I'm going to start the revision before the night it's due.

Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Reaction to a Peer's Annotation

The Person's blog who I chose to read is Silke's. Her annotations are clear, consice, and well organized so that the reader can understand what she is thinking. She also is able the keep her annotations up to date, a great quality for time management.